Old Age Poem by Eugene Levich

Old Age



Tall grass yellowed
Leaves Autumn-touched
Winter nears
As it must
Fleeting dreams
Wind-blown mist

Friday, August 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: old age
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 August 2015

OOPS! i see now that i sent more than i expected to send, including two versions of Fleeting Dreams! :)

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2015

how have two other readers beaten me to the punch? ! somehow 'touched' and 'must' works for me as a rhyming pair. nice. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Fleeting Dreams What sort of dreams are those which fleet? One about ice cream which.....I must now eat? One of my little sister's big and very smelly feet? A dream which soon, down the path, does beat? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ================= how have two other readers beaten me to the punch? ! somehow 'touched' and 'must' works for me as a rhyming pair. nice. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Fleeting Dreams What sort of dreams are those which fleet? One about ice cream which.....I must now eat? One about my little sister's big and smelly feet? A dream which soon, down the path, does beat? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - An Aid To Old Age A Fleet Enema can bring you satisfaction …. when it sweeps away a bowel compaction. But don’t use them too often, or your stools will SO soften, that you’ll have yourself a bad BAD reaction. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - enough of this! ! ! happy trails to you. bri :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 August 2015

Life is mortal and death is certain. Graceful aging is but a boon Its a beautiful station Between birth n death.

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Khalida Bano Ali 14 August 2015

A wonderful poem................................

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