Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Old Is ..... - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Old is gold

Wonderful to see
And feel free
About changing scene
Style and thinking for everyone

What do the lines show?
And that glittering glow
Reflection of experience
With lively presence

You are not dying lamp
But lives unused stamp
That shall be used later on
When life is completely grown

Not to look back at all
As it is full scale
Attempt on wall
With no fear of fall

Let us not tire
And retire
As dejected person
But live more with reasons

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2016 9:50:00 PM)


    Cecile Hoarau Port-Louis exactly my point... Unlike · Reply · 1 · 2 hrs
    9 Jan
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2016 9:50:00 PM)


    Bipin Ch Rabha
    xWonderful but new also not less.
    9 Jan by Bipin Ch Rabha | Reply
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2016 9:49:00 PM)


    Ibrahim Honjo, Scott Ransopher and Llean Solano Goldano like this.
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  • (1/9/2016 8:08:00 AM)


    Let us not tire
    and retire
    As dejected person
    But to live more with reasons.
    Beautiful and inspirational write for senior citizens. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2016 8:05:00 AM)


    Let us not tire
    And retire
    As dejected person
    But live more with reasons
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 9, 2016



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