On A December Night Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

On A December Night

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One night for a whole hour
I stayed awake for meteor shower
A good night's sleep tho' I badly need
Beckoned me the fireworks of Geminid.

I imagined sky in dazzling light
Shooting stars in lunatic flight
And me this splendor viewing alone
With moon at west close to dawn.

On my hairs dripped dews noiseless
Eyes caught Jupiter's shining face
I stood the hour in awesome stupor
Seeking in Gemini the bright Castor.

Lo not flowed the faintest streak
Winter's chill dug and pricked
Smell of morn when was airborne
I left for bed displeased and worn.

Monday, June 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Geminid meteors - name derived from the Gemini constellation
Castor - the bright star in Gemini
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soumita Sarkar 03 July 2014

smell of morn..........liked it.....nature at its best.

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Piyush Dey 30 June 2014

lovely, the rhyme gave the poem a beautiful effect. i liked how you wrote the poem, it was nice. keep writing.

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