On My Birthday Poem by banamala sen

On My Birthday

Rating: 5.0


On my birthday,

You gave me the greatest gift of all,

Your love,

Expressed in magical words!

You stole my heart many many years ago,

Never got it back, never wished to get it back.

I had no idea how all-encompassing love can be,

Taking every bit of my heart,

Your heart,

My love,

Your love.

Our life -

Love, and trust, and dream, and care,

Being together,

Even not being together.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratan Ghosh 16 August 2019

Dear Banamala, you expressed love 'in magical words ' even when not being together ' Really beautiful poem, brilliant expression. Sure it will be In my favourite list.

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2018

i especially enjoyed the last line: Even not being together.......BUT i'd want to have some contact with the person i LOVE, via phone, email, or other mail! memories of an absent love can be fulfilling up to a point, but, for me, would not suffice. i would probably seek ANOTHER LOVE! i usually do not care much for 'love poems', but i'll send this to My PoemList. bri ;)

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Banamala Sen 26 May 2018

Thank you for including this in your My Poem List. Glad you enjoyed the last line, which is the heart of the poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 20 May 2018

A wonderful romantic write.+++10

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Banamala Sen 20 May 2018

Thank you for reading my poem and rating generously. Glad to share with you and all the poets at PM.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 May 2018

Dear Banamala, such a lovely write??????

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Banamala Sen 20 May 2018

Thank you, Bernard, for encouraging comment. Glad to share with you.

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