On Seeing A Robin Poem by John Carter Brown

On Seeing A Robin

Rating: 5.0


There he stands,
As pert as can be
Ruler of all,
In the sycamore tree;
Fresh from his roost,
Taking the day
Singing his song,
He's something to say.

There he is,
As cool as a king
Awaiting his mate,
Embracing the spring;
A turn of the head,
A feather to preen
A nest to be built,
To offer his queen.

There he stands,
Looking his best
His tilted-up tail,
His cherry-red chest;
A gleam in his eye,
A worm in his bill
And for all I know,
He's standing there still.

(Written Dec 2013)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 23 December 2013

Really sweet John, I can just picture the little chap - you have captured him perfectly here.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 December 2013

A turn of the head, A feather to preen A nest to be built, To offer his quee really nice and perfect..as i always said, you are a talented writer john.

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Greg Reiners 18 December 2013

The last 2 lines finished the poem in a way no other words could. Very well written.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 December 2013

standing still, good write, thanks.

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