I look at myself, and who do I see?
I see the me I used to be,
Not the one that other people see;
The question be, which one is me?
(Written May 2014)
I challenge you to make this into a longer poem without failing to rhyme. That might be the right thing to do with this gem!
Not the one that other people see; .With this line this is a heart touching poem.I liked it very much.
Our opinion of ourselves matter a lot. Good job! thanks for sharing
The question is - does the one we see in the mirror reflect our true self, or the self we think we are. Food for thought here John.
This is a frequently asked question by lots of us, John, I am sure. So nice to see it put into words.
John-you got it all said so very well in just four brief lines. Perhaps we all should take a look. Does your mirror need cleaning? This does provoke some room for thought.Worth a higher rating
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
cute little rhyme :)