On That Path Poem by Madina Morr

On That Path

Rating: 3.5


I'm on that path,
So was my mother,
I'm on that path,
Just like my brother.
I'm on that path,
I didn't know my father,
I'm on that path,
And i am the master.
I'm on that path,
upon the good, straying from evil.
I'm on that path-
There is no cheating.
I'm on that path,
God knows i need him.
I'm on that path,
and i hope i'm never leaving ;)

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2019

On a path the mother has traveled and this path is noticed. Here brother travels, sister travels and finally you too travel. Right path is good to chose by God's grace. You should avoid the evil path. An interesting poem is brilliantly penned.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 05 December 2012

it is so simple reflection of mind.... i liked it...

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 13 September 2012

And stay on that path, where cheating and straying is forbidden, lovely poem Madina. Keep writing. Siya_! !

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