On The Bench Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

On The Bench

Rating: 5.0


on the bench
Your position and mood
Still I can smile

Thursday, May 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: anxiety,disappointment,smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Dear poet, very well written haiku poem. it shows me the image of a prisoner and a police officer in my mind screen. parallelly a suspected refugee and an army officer

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Thanks dear Sara Vanna, your imagination is also true and that gives another view

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