On The Ocean Waves - Poem by Sunprincess

from a most enchanting island
a ship of luxury sails away
goodbye, all the natives wave

upon the ocean blue, a mermaid
swims with her friends in sunrays
where happiness fills all her days

Topic(s) of this poem: vacation

Form: Found Poem

Comments about On The Ocean Waves by Sunprincess

  • (8/26/2015 12:17:00 PM)

    So delightful, it bubbles with your trademark penmanship, it reminds me of the little mermaid, minus the ending where she becomes human, the closing is lush and sweet, just like a happy ending SHOULD be. Nice to see new stuff Sunprincess. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (8/26/2015 11:00:00 AM)

    Wow... Happiness all around...Wonderful poem... Iiked it
    Please reviews some of my poems if you find time.....Thanks in advance.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 27, 2015

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