On The Ocean Waves Poem by * Sunprincess *

On The Ocean Waves



from a most enchanting island
a ship of luxury sails away
goodbye, all the natives wave

upon the ocean blue, a mermaid
swims with her friends in sunrays
where happiness fills all her days

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 26 August 2015

So delightful, it bubbles with your trademark penmanship, it reminds me of the little mermaid, minus the ending where she becomes human, the closing is lush and sweet, just like a happy ending SHOULD be. Nice to see new stuff Sunprincess.

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M Asim Nehal 26 August 2015

Wow... Happiness all around...Wonderful poem... Iiked it Please reviews some of my poems if you find time.....Thanks in advance.

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