I Made This Poem For You Poem by * Sunprincess *

I Made This Poem For You

Rating: 4.9


my special creation is a beautiful golden poem
it's value is priceless made solely with love
when the sun came bursting through the clouds
early one morning in the springtime of April

painting the sky beautiful with a pretty rainbow
so I ask the rainbow to share colours with me
and happy the rainbow says, 'yes love anything'
now I have lovely colours for my special poem

then I thought the remaining thing I really need
is something most special, only thing - real love
and beside me a pink blossom mimosa smiles
with sparrows chirping, carefree and happy

I say- please, would you share your love with me
'endless is our love, ' they say, 'like the blue sea'
with special love and colors in my golden poem
now I feel, life is even more beautiful than ever

yet, this special poem was made with love for you
so my lovely friends, I offer you my special poem

Sunday, August 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 02 September 2015

This is lovely poem with a friendly gesture and gives a gives a pleasant feel in reading.

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Chinedu Dike 02 September 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Sunprincess. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Mannika S Raghav 09 February 2016

really lifts your spirit, beautiful imagery

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Pamela Sinicrope 08 February 2016

Congratulations for getting poem of the day. I especially like your found poems! I saved Chardonnay as on of my favorites. This one is stellar too. Rainbows are an incredible poetic inspiration!

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Pamela Sinicrope 08 February 2016

Your other poem was Cabernet Sauvignon... NOT Chardonnay... Oops.

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M Asim Nehal 20 April 2021

When love respond we feel something like your poem......Loved it...I say- please, would you share your love with me 'endless is our love, ' they say, 'like the blue sea' with special love and colors in my golden poem now I feel, life is even more beautiful than ever

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L Rao 09 February 2016

Hi Sun....Its nice the thought process id good with a free flow of words down the dale... pls feel to read mine. Regards laxman Rao

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Souren Mondal 09 February 2016

A lovely, wonderfully written poem from the core of the heart.. Congratulations on having it being selected as poem of the day Sunprincess..

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 09 February 2016

thanks for making this poem for me and congrats on the recognition as the member poem of the day

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 February 2016

Joyful! Like the blue sea. Nice work.

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