On The Way Poem by Margaret O Driscoll

On The Way

Rating: 5.0


Fenceless fields of young wheat
Soaked by swivelling irrigation
Roadside lines of cherry trees
On my way to the train station
Red tiled roofs
Wisteria clad wall
From gnarled branches
Trailing blossoms fall
Distant mountain peaks
White with snow
A deep ravine
Just down below
A humpback bridge
A hairpin bend
Soon my journey
Comes to an end

Thursday, November 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: branches,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Watching young wheat fields from train during journey is very interesting definitely. Very amazing drafting shared with reality...10

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Margaret O Driscoll 23 February 2016

Thank you for your kind comment Kumar!

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Daniel Kelleher 26 November 2015

Reminds me of a station long since closed down happy days, Very nice

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Margaret O Driscoll 26 November 2015

Thank you Dan, pity many were closed down!

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Daniel Kelleher 26 November 2015

I can almost see the station. Very nice

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