On Thirtydays Of Separated Love Comments

a love with snuggles of living god, and a fear to him Crawling in my teary sight Chooses to retreat to old track. Still, I celebrate lone cocktail Without a peg of drink... Addiction, Chases me back to the talkative tick, Prancing on my sorrowful brink; Flash, Bursts into thousand beams but, The fire flies show their lovely light..

incredible passion.... renews my faith in life...

This poem is good for a favourite. No doubt.

Beautiful poem, so well written, Must take part in life`s fest, lovely,

bringing shakespeare added to the richness of the poem...

I like the beginning referring to Shakespeare birthday, the great love poet, and the tics of time, the sip of nonalcoholic wine, speaking about love and loss. Very well composed.

Absolutely wonderful write.grief or the feeling of seperation between hearts well built.