Once More Poem by Anup Kelgaokar

Once More

Rating: 3.5


I saw a school boy fade up with studies,
afraid of exam & worrying the worries.
He wished, God, if he was baby then,
to crawl, to toddle & hop like hen.

Soon, I saw a college boy, bunked a lecture,
pondering was he over past & future.
He wished, God, if he was school boy again,
to play with butterflies and in the rain.

Then, I saw an adult who was a clerk,
with distress finishing the office work.
He wished, God, to give once more childhood,
to enjoy school & delicious food.

I saw a old man bent in the back,
the strength in muscles did he lack.
He wished, God, if again he was a youth,
to fight for justice and the truth.

Then,
I saw a quiet old man remembering his life's theme,
Soon he heard the knell ringing for him.
No wonder if he wished, God,
to have his life once more! ! !

Once More
Saturday, June 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,philosophical ,reflections
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
About this poem:
During every phase of our life, we feel as if we are stuck into it. We blame it, curse it.
And once that phase is over and we move on unto the next phase of life. Now we curse the present phase and remember our past phase as better than present one.

We always remember our past claiming it to be glorious and happy forgetting that tomorrow we are going to say the same for today.

So, let us enjoy every moment of today and prove it to be fruitful with hard work.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 June 2015

Lovely narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. It's a great poem, like a parable from the Bible. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Thabani Khumalo 21 June 2015

i like the way the story continues chronologically. read my poems.

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Kelly Kurt 20 June 2015

A great parable, Anup. Live for today and make it worth remembering tomorrow Thanks for sharing Peace

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