Once, The 'Paraclete' Poem by elysabeth faslund

Once, The 'Paraclete'

Rating: 5.0


Ice on two continents.
One life.
Trails of Mammouths'
Shadow ending.

Our prints mingled
Grasslands.
One path green.
One white.

What price the
Owner of bones
Paid...
Green paths.

Betrayal.

Watch my stance
On ice.
What price
For survival...

In frigid wastelands?
The heart...
Slowing, slowing...
The Warrior.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 20 April 2008

Lysbeth, once again I am amazed at your virtuosity. This certainly streches all my powers of imagination and, I think, bolts a powerful message and lesson.

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David Desantis 18 April 2008

wow....very beautiful stuff here....i got the image of someone standing alone on ice and contemplating life....very pretty, i really appreciated...check out my stuff if you get a chance!

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Thad Wilk 16 April 2008

A wonderful read Elysabeth! Very well executed, thank you for sharing! *10*! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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