Once Upon A Beach Poem by gina prettybrowneyes

Once Upon A Beach

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little piggies dressed in white
prance along the hidden night
dodging seashells left and right

salty waters wash upon the shores
sends the people coming in hoards
sandy feet grasping surfboards

the golden globe falls into the sea
where painted toes and seagulls can be
where footprints and jellyfish see

the magic that is the sea

Saturday, November 25, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: magic,sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Jones 25 November 2006

AHH! GINANESS, you made it prettier, I can envision it all clearer, w00ts for poem revisions _Kyle.

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