One Billion To None Poem by Aden Orie

One Billion To None

Rating: 5.0


Simplify the world to one
just you
and 1 rising sun
would we wake up to a better day?
whould all of our problems
go away
would all of what we have be taken
or,
would we be mistaken
for someone else?
would we restart
all over again
or would have we been robbed
of all our pain
make so that
if there was
1 billion you's
and none of them
that the world
would be a better place
none of them
just one face
you
can change the world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Austin Zaratzian 08 May 2008

that is very good you speak a lot of truth you've got a stong heart, keep it up

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Jurietta Duraan 08 May 2008

A lovely poem with very mature insight... thanks for sharing - I really liked it.

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Evaughn Gray 08 May 2008

i agree with Yuri here, your a great poet..keep it up..~Hazel

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Rebecca Howard 08 May 2008

you are a great poet. and i dont think there is really anything else to say. except keep writing.

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Carrol Hoffman 12 May 2008

well writen great pice of art one of my favorite poems

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Tyease Collins 09 May 2008

Beautiful One of the best poems I've read ^_^ Tyease

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Tyease Collins 09 May 2008

Beautiful One of the best poems I've read ^_^ Tyease

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Joseph Poewhit 09 May 2008

Nice wish - but GOD made the GOOD & EVIL for our testing place, the JUDGMENT DAY - HEAVEN or OUT THE DOOR

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Sallie Howson 09 May 2008

interesting idea..bravo

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