* One By One Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur

* One By One

Rating: 2.8


To stray like unskilled,
and unfortunate,
with futile gestures,
and abortive aims,
It is not always,
To loose every time,
When everyone comes,
bare foot and empty handed,
who knows the written fortune, and shining lucks,
and to live with uneven endeavour to survive,
and ruling perils and insomniac eyes, ,
uncertain and wrecked,
broken dreams,
and nightmares,
ruining everyone,
one by one.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 01 October 2009

''To stray like unskilled, and unfortunate, with futile gestures, and abortive aims, It is not always, To loose every time, ''...i agree wth this statement..as a wheel, it spins...in a game, there is a win and loose...so not all the time we loose...but in everytime we are in the best of our life, we should have reservation so that when time comes we loose, we are already prepared..i agree wth hamukh's commts, we must try to overcome and enjoy rather than burdened it...i like ur commnt haz..........and to rafique, i like the presentation of this piece..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2009

To stray like unskilled, and unfortunate, with futile gestures, and abortive aims, It is not always, To loose every time, .......got to challenge everytime we face it...must try to overcome and joy rather thanburdened with....lovely poem with powerful thought....10 read mine....you go alone....yes to to...yes yes yes..hopes against hopes

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Rafique Farooqi 22 September 2009

Depression is one of serious problems in society...................and expected big hunter in coming decades

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Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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