Hunting Poems: 193 / 500

(*) Rage Of Honour

Rating: 3.2

Rumble of sparkling,
awaking the peace hating,
monster minded,
licking the victory songs,
written on walls of history,
with ancient spells,
roaring in the dark caves,
back for hunting,
the heads of ages,
again unsheathing their swords,
of ill design.
mothers crying,
for new borns,
and sun eaten by eclipse,
and the blood of civil,
quenching the thirst of evil,
and the suicidal bombers
invading the streets,
with virulent aims,
poisoning the ears,
with their outcasted lies.
this invisible enemy,
carcinogen to life,
hiding in the laps of civilization
Wanting terminate,
The days and nights,
To smokes of darkness..

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2009

yes fine poetic reaction penned beautifully! terorism shud halt down wherever it is.. 10+

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Yelena M. 29 August 2009

this is a very powerful poem, I like your style of poetry very much, vivid lines of few words.thanks for sharing, Rafique. Y.M.

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Nikunj Sharma 29 August 2009

Blood of civil, quenching.........of evil, really a touching and socially relevant piece.nicely paced and rhymed too. Thanks 4 sharing

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Lady Grace 28 August 2009

night walkers are not only terrorist..night walkers include special forces..well, this is well written..

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 28 August 2009

A touching poetic reaction to the realities around.

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Marieta Maglas 15 March 2010

very nice poem, deep thoughts, well embedded 10/10

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Samah Elhawy 21 September 2009

what a great words....god bless you and thank you for sharing this with me

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2009

and sun eaten by eclipse, and the blood of civil, quenching the thirst of evil, and the suicidal bombers invading the streets, ..................devil is rasing head agn quenching the thirst of evil and sending the sucial bombers to tear us apart.... we got to bevigilant on this issue... beautiful write and i appiricate the constructive thought....10 read mine martyres....blood all over...bullet proff....pora pora pora

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Gillena Cox 31 August 2009

Profound thoughts, well penned, to lament one of our saddest, present day, world issues

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Rehana Nazli 29 August 2009

and the suicidal bombers invading the streets, with virulent aims, poisoning the ears, with their outcasted lies. this invisible enemy, carcinogen to life, hiding in the laps of civilization Wanting terminate, The days and nights, To smokes of darkness.. Thank you for highlighting the evils of war...it is really cancer of the so called civil societies who sell the WMD, produced in response to and in the name of those powerless people who see no end to the war....

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