Rafique Farooqi

Freshman - 601 Points (Date of birth 22 April 1959 / Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur)

! The Voyage - Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Just the day,
comes,
with an iron will,
the way to conquer the passions,
standing strong for the will,
droned by half hearted gestures,
and sick blood,
heated to warm,
inhabiting the frozen hope,
Clenched jaw,
over the aggressions,
a defeated wish,
to surrender,
famous faces,
staring sky, ,
the voyage,
with design of numbness,
against the howling winds,
and in deep waters.


Comments about ! The Voyage by Rafique Farooqi

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/29/2016 1:40:00 PM)


    Standing strong for the will! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (4/29/2015 12:17:00 PM)


    The voyage in deep waters itself is perilous.... if it is against howling winds, it becomes more arduous! But unfortunately we are all fated to fight against swirling currents! A great write! (Report) Reply

  • (6/9/2012 3:50:00 AM)


    Enjoyed the voyage, Doc!


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    Two Thumbs Up!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/20/2009 8:57:00 PM)


    to surrender,
    famous faces,
    staring sky, ,
    the voyage,
    with design of numbness,
    against the howling winds,
    and in deep waters.hopefullywe can survive andconquortheworldby optimistic views and not with half heated drive. keep your destination inalmighty's hand and rest can be thehistory... lovee the poem....10
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  • (12/11/2009 2:16:00 AM)


    Half hearted efforts seldom succeed, conviction and iron will are required to put the things right, a very meaningful write with great fllow! (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2009 1:07:00 AM)


    couldn't conquer I
    perhaps
    eyes were set to fire
    iron heart revitalized
    to breathe again
    after
    the firing avalanche

    nice to see your lines and i was inspired by.........lovely poem indeed! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2009



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