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! The Voyage

Rating: 2.6

Just the day,
comes,
with an iron will,
the way to conquer the passions,
standing strong for the will,
droned by half hearted gestures,
and sick blood,
heated to warm,
inhabiting the frozen hope,
Clenched jaw,
over the aggressions,
a defeated wish,
to surrender,
famous faces,
staring sky, ,
the voyage,
with design of numbness,
against the howling winds,
and in deep waters.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 11 December 2009

couldn't conquer I perhaps eyes were set to fire iron heart revitalized to breathe again after the firing avalanche nice to see your lines and i was inspired by.........lovely poem indeed! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 April 2016

Standing strong for the will! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 29 April 2015

The voyage in deep waters itself is perilous.... if it is against howling winds, it becomes more arduous! But unfortunately we are all fated to fight against swirling currents! A great write!

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Enjoyed the voyage, Doc! ????? Two Thumbs Up!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2009

to surrender, famous faces, staring sky, , the voyage, with design of numbness, against the howling winds, and in deep waters.hopefullywe can survive andconquortheworldby optimistic views and not with half heated drive. keep your destination inalmighty's hand and rest can be thehistory... lovee the poem....10

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Ejaz Khan 11 December 2009

Half hearted efforts seldom succeed, conviction and iron will are required to put the things right, a very meaningful write with great fllow!

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