One Clean Hand For God Poem by Richard Wlodarski

One Clean Hand For God

Rating: 5.0


My right hand's dirty
Tired of life's tasks
Such damn pain endured
And now so crippled

I've spared my left hand
Kept it clean for God
Rested and massaged
Olive branch for peace

Thursday, May 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,hands,pain,peace,suffering
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 20 May 2018

The sword hand has been crippled and cannot interfere with peace - really good! A 10.

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Very astute observation, Carl! Kerouac would be proud!

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