One Day Without Poem by Adelina Nastas

One Day Without

Rating: 4.3


My love is a bird,
it doesn't fly though...
I keep it locked in my ribcage.beat.beat.beat.
inside of me.
My love is a hummingbird flapping it's wings 80 times per second,
struggling to get out,
crushing my bones,
damaging my lungs,
until I'm out of breath, begging for mercy.
The infinite sky-his eyes,
the perfume of his skin,
the fiery rose above his chin...
My little hummingbird is getting impatient.
Is it possible to create a tornado with 80 beats/sec?
This dryness won't go away untill the next rain.
And so I wait,
another night,
another day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 12 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Adelina. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Fabrizio Frosini 07 January 2015

you posted this poem.. and then no more.. pity Keep on writing.. and post some more poems of yours..

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Khairul Ahsan 13 November 2013

'This dryness won't go away untill the next rain. And so I wait, another night, another day.' Beautifully said.

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Abhishek Mishra 25 September 2013

A beautifully written poem with a superb flow...loved it: -) keep writing.

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