One Door Is Passed Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

One Door Is Passed

Rating: 5.0


So much said goes left undone.
Promises highlighted,
Soon dissolves the interest...
Of those who were once thrilled with joy,
And much excited.

And revolving are those who sing sweet themes,
Slowing down a pace with an uncertainty...
That seem to quietly dispose of these dreams.

So much is given to a tomorrow that stays stalled.
The best is yet to come for some,
And for others nothing comes...
To rescue them afterall!

And tested with patience,
Are those with still some left!
They are seen in lines screaming ignored...
Many fainting!
And a few more running out of breath.

As one door is passed...
Among them to knock.
The one assigned to distant and dash opportunities...
Is deaf, quite blind and bored by this flock!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marci Made 08 June 2007

This is really nice and yet another ten which I often give you but don't always comment [not sure if you like comments]...I hope that you are right That the Best Is Yet To Come and that one closed door usually leads to another opening...Must be careful to choose the correct door, just once! marci. :)

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