One Instant Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

One Instant



It is not possible to burn with all fires?
And the truth of it.
All don't have petals to touch.
Wells deep inside, pink is glowing.
Empty for but one the flower.
The instant you take.
You must take; The bribe.
Just as she is, the bride.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Vaughan Jones 10 February 2014

Typo. This is a statement, coupled with an interrogatory. It is not possible to burn with all fires? Suggestion... Is it not possible to burn with all fires? Or delete the question mark.

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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