Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 481,597 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

One More Rose - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

One more rose in our family
We all remained awake wearily
It was expected at any time
The child’s cry made clock to tick that time

We all noted arrival from heaven
The prophesy from elders was proven
It is good omen and sign in the family
Everybody must rejoice and accept it happily

Many people die childless with so much to their regret
It is blessing from heaven so not to be taken as bad luck or fate
Not all people may be that much lucky or have it with choice
So early morning cry from child was heard like cuckoo’s voice

“I will be called grandpa” how much joy it generated
Gave enough of joy and occasion was certainly to be celebrated
My feet were taking unusual steps to spread news
Though it was known to family members and to others very few

Family is like garden with all the members as beautiful flowers
Everybody takes you very seriously with respect as followers
So it becomes duty of family head to celebrate arrival as grand occasion
Throw gorgeous party and make it known to all about addition

It is unique as well routine too for all of us
Life is built and enjoyed around with trust
One life is leaving behind for other to enter
The mother earth is heavenly place or center

Life is never ending mission
To stay permanently or leave behind is not our decision
We all know about the temporary refuge here
Leave without any notice take heavenly flight to reach there

I know that it will be moment of little happiness
But it gives moment of joy amidst lots of stress
Everybody forgets pain and sorrow for few seconds
As it is graceful occasion and certainly demands (celebration)

Comments about One More Rose by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/13/2011 6:59:00 PM)

    Zaher's Sweetheart
    Congratulations Jadia..a warm-touching write...a most beautiful closing verse....
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/13/2011 6:59:00 PM)

    Yes a new member in family means new hopes and new dreams, new horizons and of course celebrations. Congratulations to you and ur family
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  • (12/13/2011 10:57:00 AM)

    Wow..the birth of newborn in a family brings so much of hope and joy to the family they forget all sorrows..a time for jubilant celebration indeed..feelings nicely woven into a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2011 7:34:00 AM)

    “I will be called grandpa” how much joy it generated
    Gave enough of joy and occasion was certainly to be celebrated'

    joys, and pain often seem to close in relation, yet this poem gives beautiful emotions somewhat of both...phenomenal write.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 13, 2011

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