One Tongue Made Of Flesh Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

One Tongue Made Of Flesh

Rating: 5.0


I lowered
my hands to the cusp of her nib,
and she whispered firmly.

Do you
want to go down to the sea,
and go
swimming, in the darkness?

I was
to young and
excited
to say no or resist
and she nodded
my head, in agreement.

Tuesday, December 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: blue planet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 20 December 2016

She was in charge of your emotions as you felt the excitement of her mystique and confidence that overpowered you beautifully. Stunning write!

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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