Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 496,298 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Only Funny - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It is not only funny
But very astonishing and clumsy
We all know about the holiness of boobs
Holy mention too can be found in books

Women are much more praiseworthy
Some may wear the ugliness gifted from almighty
The deformity and unnatural growth is not in our hands
The body as such will be submerged and melted at the end

All nourishment and food is catered from that part
Our life gets shape and growth from the very start
Let us adore and praise the ladies for commendable job
We should not denigrate their honor and rob

It may be shown as world record
Many may take it as mere reference for looking forward
Any good looking natural piece deserves to be praised
But wrong way of projection should also be outrightly condemned

It must be taken as deformity in body
It is not done for records by somebody
It is really annoying for its wrong way of presentation
Otherwise it is not even worth for its mention

The opinion and perception may vary
The impression and meaning may also differently carry
Yet the basic concept of giving honor to ladies need not be compromised
Ladies deserve good comments and treatment as consciously promised


Comments about Only Funny by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/11/2011 2:34:00 AM)


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    merlyn d
    nicely said... aptly worded. i agree with ur idea. presentation of it should not result in the denigration of the lady..thank u
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/10/2011 12:36:00 AM)


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    keaobaka
    Any good looking natural piece deserves to be praised
    But wrong way of projection should also be out rightly condemned. this is brilliant line. i did not know boobs were regarded as holy! thats quite a statement actually
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  • (5/5/2011 4:30:00 AM)


    It is not only funny
    But very astonishing and clumsy
    We all know about the
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/5/2011 3:58:00 AM)


    The opinion and perception may vary
    The impression and meaning may also differently carry
    Yet the basic concept of giving honor to ladies need not be compromised
    Ladies deserve good comments and treatment as consciously promised
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 5, 2011


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