California's Sunset,
All i ask from you is only seven days;
And my lover will be with me!
Share the heat and let me see my way through,
For your beauty is like the beauty of my lover;
And all i ask from you is only seven days.
What a message to 'California'sunset'! The poem is highly sensuous. Great imagery and magnificent terse style make it worth reading. I liked it. Great write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sun and lover, nicly carved and mingled.