Tuesday, May 16, 2017

Open My Eyes Comments

Rating: 2.8

Oh, God the skies... With the
pine trees so high... As dawn
does rise... Each morning may
I start... With you... Opening,
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Rebecca Navarre
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Roseann Shawiak 22 May 2017

Your poem brought a smile to my mind, I had to share it with my friend, she laughed out loud, enjoying it very much! Great light-hearted poem, Rebecca, loved it! Thank you for sharing. I give it a 10+++++++++++ RoseAnn

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Rebecca Navarre 23 May 2017

Thank You! ! ! Roseann, For Your Very Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Seamus O Brian 16 May 2017

I remember the prayer meetings I was obligated to attend as a child. It seemed a lot of stuffy people trying to impress God or themselves with their pontifications that went on and on interminably. Life has taught me, Rebecca, as you have so eloquently demonstrated here, to commune with the Divine in the honest and straightforward language of the heart. A blessing to read, Rebecca. Thank you.

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Rebecca Navarre 18 May 2017

Thank You! ! ! Seamus, For Such A Beautiful And Heartfelt Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Of Such A Beautifully Strong Spirit! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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