Open One Ocean

Rating: 4.5

Screams at an azure ocean
bounce back in waves to me.
Egos spill over with frustration
of wants never meant to be.

Let go of self-absorption
awake in epiphany.
Rise above the commotion
reach a new reality.

Oneness is revelation
life's persistent mystery.
Droplets see some solution
while water moves consciously.

Drops rush and roll in motion
as currents of harmony.
Waves find inner direction
melodies of reverie.

Fragile in nascent notion
bound by fearing fates are we.
Wishes seem a mystic potion
from which we will not be free.

Open to one grand mastery
droplets of the human sea.

Saturday, October 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: oneness,sea
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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 October 2020

A well composed poem. Truly fantastic....5 stars*****

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Khairul Ahsan 17 October 2020

'Fragile in nascent notion bound by fearing fates are we. Wishes seem a mystic potion from which we will not be free.' - Nice, loved these words of wisdom!

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