Open Your Eye! Poem by Jenny Bevan

Open Your Eye!

Rating: 5.0


Open your eyes!
i can't be stong all the time
deep inside i've become a mime
it won't be a 'happily ever after' story
just a life full of fear, stress and worry

Open your eyes!
you don't see the pain you cause
with each pull of your sharp pointed claws
god forbid you should think about me
always? forever? i disagree

Open your eyes!
can't you understand?
soon i'll be moving away from your hand
i won't be drawn back into your lies
next time i'll think and be wise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2009

strong words...wisdom emerging out...the sooner the better would be...good write, Jenny...poignant...frank and expressive...10

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Josh George 26 May 2009

Very strong very deep

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