Ophrys Miracle.... Poem by Varsha M

Ophrys Miracle....

Rating: 5.0


The ophrys up on my face
Brings magnificent grace.

Right above my globe, like an umbrella
Shadow me in sun and rain of fella.

Though small I'm on the face
But hold key to gesture.

A lift of mine might mean
surprise at times or signal of fear.

A brooding low line might seems
Sadness or failure in progress.

Though small I'm, I hold my stand
Without me no one desires to move out.

Threading of it is beauty elegant
Admiring oneself on getup different.

Ophrys Miracle....
Sunday, October 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,look
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ophrys in Greek means eyebrow. So tried a different one.

Photo courtesy Hadis Ssfari unsplash.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 04 October 2020

'The ophrys up on my face Brings magnificent grace.' I think your writing true to nature, meaning this is a cleverly disguised couple of lines. My mother had about 50 plus orchids once, the Ophrys are pseudocopulation which adds depth to the poem, especially with the two female faces so beautifully made up with make up. This is the kind of poem you can return to, read again with differing meaning, which is rare and appreciated. a wonderful write.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 October 2020

Great poem ma'am. Little things we take for granted like eye brows are us.

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2020

Aptly written lines: 5** Though small I'm, I hold my stand Without me no one desires to move out.

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