Winner's Song Poem by Varsha M

Winner's Song

Rating: 4.6


Nursing was never her desire
Life was not happy to give her another offer
Failure was what haunted her
Amidst all that was dipped in brilliance.

Nothing she desired most
But to be an achiever of her passion post
Only to find oneself in the broth
That nurtured the illegitimate.

With a week voice she quivered
Only for ignorance, be all the time ignored
Suppressed by all the hauling crowd
Imposing what they experienced behind.

Life of satisfaction is not what I am against
But life of passion that rules my head
Visualizing my passion to parent
Impossible it became to breath abreast.

Dreams are rich man's chattel
For a middle man is only meant to rattle
Trying by all means to become matter
Landing on the grasses that never wither.

Qualities abound him complete
Commitment is unmatchable
Still he cannot make through
Money is the business which finish.

Accepted she the challenge life presented
Died she for the dream she had
Losing the complete balance of her mind
Reflected as a depressed kind.

Never she gave up to the suppressing call
Donned she in the shoes of life's will
Erasing all that she script whole
Until she became a blank scroll.

Injustice labored all to break her down
Bowed head of her wore the crown
As she served the sick with a smile
Even though she never desired to be a nurse.

Beauty of achievement shine
As one walks on the path of the guide
Whatever be the challenge
Ultimately becomes what he is destined to be.

Wrote on 16.10.19

Winner's Song
Wednesday, August 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: care,dream,failure,nurse
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 04 October 2020

'Nursing was never her desire Life was not happy to give her another offer Failure was what haunted her Amidst all that was dipped in brilliance.' Varsha you had me hooked on this poem from the first stanza, and if your still nursing I already know your nurturing nature, the haunting fear of failure was a giveaway, a fear of failure is an exceptionally wonderful motivator for success. I so enjoyed this poem, perhaps I should one day tell you my first no desire career option.

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Terry Craddock 06 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'A Failure Fear An Exceptionally Wonderful Motivator' inspired by the poem 'Winner's Song' by the poet Varsha Madhulika and dedicated to Varsha Madhulika.

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Sharad Bhatia 26 August 2020

This is a truly beautiful and heart touching poem about " nursing" . Actually this poem should be dedicated to Mother Teresa, who considered the service as her religion The term " nursing" refers to a person who is dedicated to the care of the patient. Nursing means one who never cares for his life, and he fulfills his duty well. The best example for nursing is the recent epidemic that has shaken the entire world.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 August 2020

destined to become what we are to be

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 August 2020

Challenges of life! ! With all the changes! " Nursing was never her desire" ! ! ! But, she is with it today; Able to help and care for others.🎶🧚‍♀️🌿 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2021

Profound, philosophical rendition set aside for deep reflective thought...

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M Asim Nehal 30 December 2020

One of your best poem. Inspiring.5**

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Akhtar Jawad 16 December 2020

Beauty of achievement shine, a beautiful poem by a lovely poetess.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2020

It's a great poem from your pen. I take a chance to read this poem again. This work takes me to a world where a noble lady like Mother Teresa preferred to dwell. That single name is sufficient enough to interpret this poem from all dimensions. Beautifully put..Top score.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2020

Such a beautiful poem! Just beautiful... Top score

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