Ordinary Poet Here Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Ordinary Poet Here
Harry Carpenter(5/13/2017 10: 57: 00 PM)
You are wasting your time purporting to write in the English language. I'm sure that in your native tongue you write coherently. This poem is almost incoherent, it reads as you speak English. I have looked at a lot l your poems they suffer from the same defects. I admire your pluck but they are not up to standard. Even your best poem is defective. The site owners must be taking pity on you because of your voluminous writings.
I also note that hardly anyone bothers to read your defective offerings
Ordinary poet
Previously I used to receive
As many high authors tried to deceive
Their conscious for pretty reasons
I claim myself as ordinary sons of soil
The poetry is merely revelation
Of how you feel an elation
When something good is heard
Or someone has used nice words in favor
It is one sort of internal feeling
That provides no ill feeling
But something good for that person
Who has saved you from bad human beings?
I feel no bad for this person
As he has explained with his reasons
Many people daily read my poems
And comment on them
I am so much thankful
Not as successful poet
But for being recognized as simple man
Who has nothing more to feel as human
I would love to have your reactions
Along with action
For poet who has rendered disservice
In the field of peace, poetry with so much of promises
though in the disguise of poetry much truism is said here...... if i take it seriously... the language, the grammar may be defective but the poetry is not....your thought your feelings your opinions are being cleared through this poems internationally.....which are or poetry is out of fault.....and there is a term for the poets.....poetic license.....and the meaning of the poetry is not only the poet wants...it is open ended...the readers create more than the very poet.. and it is the era of Drrida.... so we can talk a reader imposes upon any poem he goes through the status of a work.he interprets, analyses, examines and evaluates at definite meaning which is called 'Eschatological Criticism' after Derrida...Eschatology is from the Greek meaning 'doctrine of last thing'. so the reader's work has a stable meaning.......and we may keep hope on readers that they would mend my faults. to top it all a great poem on your feelings of poemhunter sir...
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I would love to have your reactions Along with action For poet who has rendered disservice In the field of peace, poetry with so much of promises