Orgasm Poem by jerry hughes

Orgasm



Excruciating...
The body tenses,
the heart momentarily stops.
And when your eyes refocus
you'll see her victorious smile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ridge Cahill 13 January 2009

One of my all time favorites. From start to finish this is awesome, but the last line is pure genius (and quite true) . A true gem!

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Fay Slimm 05 January 2009

After being attracted to the title (naughty me) - I think this one of the best male-assessments of the subject I have ever read....... and your end line summed up the cause for the effect..! ! ! xx Fay.

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Amie-Lee ...... 12 November 2008

Well, imagine how the men must feel if it was a reversed situation.......nice work :)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 November 2008

Marvellous feat..............the best part of our life.yeah can't live without it! Thanks for the refresher pal!

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Alison Cassidy 07 March 2008

You've been peeking again, you dirty old man. I love you. Lusty Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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