Our Footprints Poem by Brandon Rowe

Our Footprints

Rating: 4.5


As the waves roll onto land,
Our footprints fade into the sand.
But like the sun setting into the sea,
Our love will endure all eternity.
I'll stand by you and you'll stand by me,
You'll take my hand and we'll be free.
Hush my baby don't you cry,
For I'll hold you till the end of time.
With hearts as one and minds the same,
We'll start together this little game.
This game called life and I'm proud to say,
I wouldn't have it any other way

i wrote this poem for my now ex fiancee so i hope you all enjoy it as much as she once did

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandon Dugan 02 October 2008

wow that was truly beautiful great job a new personal favorite of mine

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Bradley Stewart 07 October 2008

that a nice one it rely good and I hope to read more

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Tiffany Border 19 April 2009

wow! ! ! i loved it! ! ! im speechless

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Amber Vasquez 27 March 2009

Omg I LOVE it! Write more!

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 February 2009

I liked it very much. I could tell that it was sincere. That is the most important thing in any writing. GW62

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Va Rockeya Foy 19 February 2009

wow i like ur poem its hot

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Ron Flowers 19 November 2008

Brandon, you've penned a very nice poem. Ron

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