Our Godly Versions Poets Here Poem by me poet yeps poet

Our Godly Versions Poets Here

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Many have been swayed by you and your god all say
but why has your God not incited excited or educated you
to thank all do say

Those who have posted poetry and comments on your sad display
did your god ask you to ignore all
and the soul
is just magnetism after death
we are all non existent
and have no eyes to see
nor nose to smell scent
and
you blame an imagery God
no one has ever seen

you all are all old enough
God comes just as a faith
in all of us
an unknown force
as at birth HE gifted us
with death first
and humans only
later on created
greed and thirst
depending on how God
a brain did on you did thrust
and
did you use yours ever I wonder

May god be with you
as he knows in his name
human minds and forms grow
so you may also
O God's poet

Monday, October 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: belief,creation,god,human brain,imagery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 18 September 2019

Well expressed and philosophically constructed work, in each of our cultures we are all indoctrinated with a belief in a creator, as we grow older, some of us become wiser to the flaws in what we are taught. Eventually the wise come to their own beliefs. Our minds find our beliefs. Great Poem, pity nobody else has commented they should!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 September 2019

sorry for the delay just read it now kevin poet

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