Our Inner Eye Poem by jodlizbeth dominic

Our Inner Eye

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While seeing I can see
The sights in front of me
While closing my eyes
I can see the sights
Captured inside me
At that time I become
A blind who already
Seen and experienced
The sights around and
The beauty of nature
All living beings
The materials here
The other things
Doings of human and
All other creatures
Nature's gifts and
Natural disasters
As we grown up growing
Our inner eye even though
Our outer eyes never
Become as big as that one
So we can imagine
The outer eyes acts as
The camera of man and
The result as deeds
Reactions and pictures
Keeping in the inner eye
Up to one's end of life
So keep alert always
The outer eyes along
The right path in
The way of life here
To enlarge the size of
The inner eye with fine
Sights Good wishes and
Thinking to lead a loving
Virtual life and good end
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- jokudengpoms2018

Wednesday, June 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 20 December 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 June 2018

Keeping in the inner eye Up to one's end of life So keep alert always The outer eyes along The right path in.......the i nner eye is the guiding light in us.......... beautiful message dear poet. tony

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, thank you... right, guiding light...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 June 2018

Jodlizbeth, such a well crafted poem....10+++++

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