Our Works Live As Immortal! Poem by Ramesh T A

Our Works Live As Immortal!



Without any problem, human life cannot go on in the world;
A; so, if one problem is solved, another one may start next;
Not only that, if one illness is cured, another one can start;
These things happen beyond our analysis and intuition in life!

Pain comes to our body through some part of our body structure;
Blood test shows one has thyroid problem needing medication..;
Pains stops, but pain in some other part of body begins later;
That on diagnosis shows that some internal wound needs operation!

To do that, full body check up is needed to cure that disease;
One after the other all check ups surely make one lose heart...;
Life seems to be a hell rather than a bed of roses forever..;
Feeling of frustration due to cheerless life ever pricks heart!

Yesterday, today and ever same status repeats in our life here;
But, though we lose our life, our works only make us immortal!

Wednesday, August 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2018

Life is full of problems. If a problem is solved other problem arises. Body catches disease and if one is cured then another arrives. Time comes one day body mingles in dust. So noble works should be done which make us immortal. it may be cited.... Yesterday, today and ever same status repeats in our life here; But, though we lose our life, our works only make us immortal! A beautiful poem with nice theme nicely executed.10

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Ramesh T A 15 August 2018

Thank you for well understanding wisdom of life my poem has inspired you to know and express as comment here, my friend!

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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