Out, Inside Poem by Ben Partenay

Out, Inside

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Far ahead I’ve felt
little bits and pieces
of me. Have found
myself inside

of me. A piece
has broken off and now
calls itself a different
name. Yours. Now

what to do, keep
loving, like this,
from inside of
everything.

Or leave
and call it fate,
who can argue
with that.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 17 October 2007

Lots of us leave. And call it `fate'. May be a cop-out route, who's to say? keep on, Paynter.

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