*moon Rapes His Sister Sun Poem by nimal dunuhinga

*moon Rapes His Sister Sun

Rating: 2.9

In the pitch darkness strange things can happen;
But unfortunately nowadays it happens in the daylight too.

* The title quoted from the book ' American Indian myths and legends' selected and edited by Richard Erdoes and Alfonso Ortiz.
(This violent story tells of a stormy encounter between a female sun and a male moon.)

Sandra Fowler 11 July 2008

Very thought provoking. It is true that terrible things can happen in daylight as well as in darkness. Ten for this. Warm regards, Sandra

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 15 July 2008

nice poem. very well done. Kolitha

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Duncan Wyllie 16 July 2008

Too true, we would hope that in the daylight, those doing the harm would see what they were doing and! STOP! Love duncan X

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Greenwolfe 1962 14 August 2008

I read this and I suppose it is the opening to something. I gave it a 5. GW62

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

It's amazing, love it with 10.

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Swajeet Kumar Trivedi 28 November 2017

Have a nice time to read this poetry have a heart beat languagetowards the haven scene.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 February 2010

Uncontrolled and unguided gratification …psychopaths are in plenty… Excellent Caption...congrat… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ken E Hall 09 February 2010

The brevity of the poem speaks out loud and clear worthy of top marks.. regards

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Pradyumna Jyotir 28 January 2010

So much conveyed with so little. A poem very well crafted.The brevity is dynamic as it is powerful. Thank you for sharing.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 December 2009

I don't know how to reply to this one.More food for thought.

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nimal dunuhinga

nimal dunuhinga

kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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