Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 817,477 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Out Of Trouble - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

How can I assure you?
How can I make you feel it true?
I am not emotionless creature
I am real human for sure

I need loving partner and friend
Who can accompany till the end
It is not only wish or desire
But life long wish coupled with inner fire

I have come across many
But their taste is varied
My hope was not bellied
As more and more people I have relied

I do not claim to be near to the truth
I am prepared to adjust different breath
Let another soul beat with my drum
I shall wait eagerly for her turn

In this way, the clay can be shaped
Into beautiful look and wrapped
This art piece shall be for my exclusive show
I shall look at it and my cheeks may glow

It is simple thinking
Not wishful yet almost striking
It disturbs mind and compels to find
I go out to nature’s refuge to turn kind

Nature can grant me way out
As she her self is beautiful and talked about
Cuckoos and other birds make her company memorable
I find it as right place to get out of trouble


Comments about Out Of Trouble by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/19/2014 5:56:00 AM)

    Nature can grant me way out!

    Jawahar Gupta8 minutes ago
    I do not claim to be near to the truth
    I am prepared to adjust different breath
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/19/2014 5:56:00 AM)

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    Charlotte A7 minutes ago
    A great poem, but a lot of grammar mistakes which make it hard to read. But for someone who can't speak English you have a good way with words
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/19/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    How can I assure you?
    How can I make you feel it true?
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 19, 2014


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