Out Struts The Breeze Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Out Struts The Breeze

Rating: 5.0

Summer at its peak
Even birds don't venture out
Parched, out struts the breeze.

Monday, April 22, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,summer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In the rising heat-wave conditions in the peak of summer in Kerala, the tiniest of a breeze comes a relief.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Where have the comments made by my fellow poets vanished? Please help us, ph!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 April 2024

A brilliant and succinct depiction of extreme heat. The Philippines is in the same boat. The scorching heat is causing havoc in all corners of the country. A well crafted haiku.

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Thank you, Rose Marie. For your time, for understanding my poems and appreciating them

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April is the Summer Spring Season in Kerala. It is severely hot here: 40 degree Celsius (115 degree F) . But we have many trees, shrubs and plants that flower in this heat. Vishu our Summer Spring Festival was on 14 April

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 April 2024

Is it NOW Summer in Kerala? Or are you telling about it? Here in the Netherlands we still have Springtime, but you created a crystal clear composition wherefore 5 Stars full. TFS

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Thank you Sylvia. My answer to you is posted above. Please.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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