Over A Piece Of Bread Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Over A Piece Of Bread

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Over a piece of bread
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Fair was the sky
Cold was the morn
Bright was the day
Along the pavement
I was walking and listening
To my gentle footsteps
When I heard his call
From above the treetop
He was in the trees watching
Over a chunk of bread
Lying on the pavement
He waited my exit from the spot
So as to grab the chunk and fly off
I drifted just a foot away
And saw him on the pavement
He looked left and right and cawed
Then came in front of a pigeon
Over the piece of bread
To claim his stake
The pigeon looked frightened
And he snapped off
The bread and flew away
Minutes passed
Yet the pigeon was poking around
Thinking what went wrong to the bread
And he was none
Other than a crow crooked

Wednesday, December 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 05 December 2014

presented it in an amazing way...like it

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Piyush Dey 05 December 2014

Simple and touching. Keeps you hooked to the end. Good write.

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Valsa George 05 December 2014

I could so well visualize the scene! You have described it wirth such lucidity and flow! Enjoyed much!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2014

Impressive and heart touching............10

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