Over And Over And Over Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Over And Over And Over

Rating: 5.0


You talk about I love it coming back
and when it ever, never should it must.
That rage within, upon my brow it grows.
From each vow I gave, you threw them back.
Stronger now and makes your, why my curse.

The look unlike sweet lotus black astride it
sits here wide across my stark and moody face.
It once, it was each mask I wore for you, for all.
A flower white so bright and tall so neat and trim.
I, my need for bars of silver trim,
each word you spoke was gold my bed, I loved.

My mind, your voice, my love, your hate mistrust
my tree, your deepest need, I have to cut you off.
The magic blood deep rivers flowed you watched.
With your greedy eyes, I made it grow for you,
deep inside to show my love, and long my dark regrets.
I planted seeds and grew some heady weeds, I read.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 07 November 2009

The magic blood deep rivers flowed................ ............................................................. IIP, so touching lines... From rich imagination too cry - poets...10......

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Tai Chi Italy 07 November 2009

Mmmmmm sounds like a highly inspiring read iip! There are trims in there too close together for my liking, but over all, it poem sings when read out loud, tongue wrapping poetry. So you have green fingers too huh? Smiling at you Tai

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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