Gold Star - 4,540 Points (December.1955 / India)

Over-Hydration - Poem by S.D. TIWARI

cells store excess fluid

plump size change conduct as fools

clever clouds excrete

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/7/2012 10:19:00 PM)

    Bet you would have thjought twice about writing this if you were In New York with me today...103 degrees...Thought our Big Apple would turn into our Burnt Apple! LOL! Hey...I enjoyed this...and isn't India fairly warm to hot most of the year? ~FjR~ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 7, 2012

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