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Who Made Hell? - Poem by S.D. TIWARI

Who made hell
God has made the earth an other heaven
Beautiful land, mountain, rivers and ocean
Wonderful creatures, plants, birds, animals,
Day and night, air; to subsist lot of materials.

He created human, to protect this heaven,
Then why human is perturbing his creation?
Why he is making weapon, gun and canon?
Why creating hatred and killing the human?

To show power, forces others to succumb,
To fill own desire make few of them numb,
For own pleaser causes others to suffer,
For own richness he grabs wealth of others?

To answer the profound question, can you tell
It was a heaven, who made the earth hell?

(c) S.D. Tiwari
email sdtiwari1@gmail.com

Comments about Who Made Hell? by S.D. TIWARI

  • Rupert Hentzau (10/31/2017 6:13:00 AM)

    I find you have a great difficulty in expressing yourself in English.
    The last line is the best: It was a heaven, but who made the earth hell?

    I wish you had written in your native language.
    By trying to write in unfamiliar English, you are twisting yourself into knots.
    The stupid reviewers below are only trying to flatter you
    with thoughtless. foolish, fawning praise.

    I am sure you would be a better success in your native language.
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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (8/23/2015 10:45:00 PM)

    Truly, God has made earth and heaven for peace but man created the hell.
    A lovely poem indeed.
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  • Vipins Puthooran (10/1/2011 7:29:00 AM)

    It's a great poem, , , poignant write...
    Once God created earth as heaven in the acme of ecstacy... When we erode the forbidden fruits of world, we are banished from the elsyian garden of world and making our lances to duell with others...
    And thus we makes a paradise into a nadir..
    Excellent and a great poem..
    Magnificient write... Tops marks for this philanthropist....
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  • Abdallah Gamal (8/11/2011 7:40:00 AM)

    Excellent poem with vivid imagery, , and amazing rhyme, , really good poem :) (Report) Reply

  • (8/11/2011 7:16:00 AM)

    A nice and good poem. (Report) Reply

  • S.d. Tiwari (8/9/2011 8:42:00 PM)

    Thanks for taking interest in this poetry. Answer is in the poetry itself. Pl carry on reading my poems and giving your valuable comments. Thanks, (Report) Reply

  • (8/9/2011 2:11:00 PM)

    good one....poetry end's with question and answer remain in dark. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, August 12, 2011

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