Over Take Me- - My Son Poem by me poet yeps poet

Over Take Me- - My Son

Rating: 2.5


O what a lovely poem

JAWAD AKHTAR JANABH JI

Child is Father of man
a new teacher is born every day
every moment
O poet great one

How can a grandfather be left behind
all young ones love their kind
and
when the kids take over
the oldy
then smiles come about all over

Man is the father of child
and
then the Child takes over
no one else can be a teacher
but the kid now in full composure

Your grandchild perhaps

God Bless the youth of any country
upon his shoulders lies
a great responsibility
of genuine teaching

in continuation of cyclic living

Wednesday, November 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: children,cycle ,love and friendship,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 21 November 2018

Nice poem, a nice way of acknowledging my poem, thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2018

Nice poem, finally the baton is to be passed on to the next generation.10/10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 November 2018

but of course we took over we must also hand over how else will the engine of life run can you say or any one life began a millennia ago shall have many more to go pollution yes or know man will be born and die alone leave behind a legacy like will do the likes of you and me

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