Ketan Hukare

Rookie - 274 Points (24 September 1997 / Thane (W))

Overcome - Poem by Ketan Hukare

It was dark and I was over there
Standing at the edge of a cliff.
My will, was it strong?
But my knees were way too weak
To stand alone; will I fall
Into the deep?
Yet there's a silence that
I may never know.
Silence about the tales world told
They were never true; I know
The games I played
I will always lose!
Still I try my best to
Overcome my fear to lose again.
I will vent in all new way
So someone will surely come
To save my life in time,
Just in time!

Let me walk on an all new way
Still to be paved; with someone
Because I am a little afraid
And lo! I am standing at the edge
Of the cliff again!
But my knees don't feel weak!
My wills, they feel stronger!

Comments about Overcome by Ketan Hukare

  • Unwritten Soul (2/9/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    This is a great poem especially from someone who at such young age like you, i know you will overcome things easily have courage, be braver and you should never say your knees too weak, because after all if your heart and mind are strong, you will able do anything! just go and fight it_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Vivek Tiwari (2/7/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    Our positive thought sphere shall always keep our nerves strong and full of courage. Good change of thought from negative to positive. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 3, 2013

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