From The Unknown Land Poem by Ketan Hukare

From The Unknown Land

Rating: 4.3


In the land unknown
There lived two ineffable lovers
Who daily met on a bridge
Built between banks of a river.

They were not too young
They were not that old
They just were teens......
Still teens to behold.

They thought about each-other
Every second of the long day
But when they would meet-
Not a word to say!

But even silence has a language
Understood well by those eyes
Which have affection and care
But no place for lies.

Alas! Considering the future
They decided to part
Yet they were connected somehow
What a play of heart!

They both grew up enough
To stand tall by their own.
But needed each-other desperately
No longer they could stay alone.

Then they met at the same bridge
So happy to see eachother's faces.
So happy to be together
Like two ends of shoe laces.

And I, the traveler from that land
Has come to greet, to shake hand
With the lovers who came here
From my unknown land.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 26 December 2012

A great poem, like it. May I invite you to read my new poem called, For Bartley Gorman King Of The Gypsies.

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Vijay Sai R 29 December 2012

a beautiful romantic poem...

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Guy Lip-more 29 December 2012

Good poem, liked this lots. Loved the lines.. What a play of hearts and Like two ends of shoe laces

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Wow so romantic! Teenage love continued in adulthood..

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Unwritten Soul 29 December 2012

Good poem with a nice story and mimicking melody...keep writing_Soul

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Valsa George 19 January 2013

A beautiful romantic poem. The two young lovers grew out of their initial infatuation and allowed their love to mature and ripe! Ofcourse they have to be greeted for remaining steadfast in their love all these long years! !

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Theodore Tilmoth 09 January 2013

2 ends of shoe laces! ! ! [- -I like this phrase! heart-touching! keep wrting, my pal

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wow! a remarkable and romantic poem! strong love built way ago, shattered and ended back in each others arms! great love!

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Kelvin Owusu 01 January 2013

a lovely bed time story of a poem

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Vishal Sharma 31 December 2012

wow..it made me remember my past days when I and my love.....ah! ! ! what were those days...so inseperable....nice poem buddy...great talent with a constant flow of feelings...

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