(p) 1 (Sufiyana) I Dance, I Dance Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(p) 1 (Sufiyana) I Dance, I Dance

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Whirling images flashing past
Your white robe
Your face
Ahhh....that face
The moon paled in comparison
Divine in its purity
Smile that said You were free
Free from all desires and longings
Eyes without any layers
With a direct door to Your inner spirit
Your movements with the grace of the stars in the nightsky
The mist in my vision cleared looking at You
And
I dance
I dance, I dance, I dance, I dance
Like Your whirling images
Keeping pace with them
Never to let them run away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 11 April 2007

Indeed, a very good write..... I loved the way you concluded the narrations.... I dance; like your whirling images; keeping pace with them; never to let them run away...... that was beautiful! You have been maturing very well with each of your narrations.... keep them coming... I am sure we all in PH are loving your this dance to glory!

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